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Ok, I've been seeing really crappy OC's (original characters) floating around the place lately. I thought that I could help you guys out here.
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-What is a original character? It's a fan-made character someone usually makes for a book, show, game, etc that is used as a means to "interact" with the main characters of a book, show, game, etc. Unfortunately, some people get this wrong and their character/self-insert may become a Mary/Gary Sue.

-What is a Mary/Gary Sue? Well....they have the following traits:

-The plot of the book, show, game, etc goes THEIR way (If this only briefly mentions a canon character and is more oc-centric, it's usually ok)
-They have NO weaknesses
-Any and all characters are attracted to them
-They have a TRAGIC past
-They are a long lost relative or are the long lost lover/girlfriend/boyfriend to a character or more
-They die a TRAGIC death
-Every good guy and bad guy likes or loves them
-Immortal, can bring people back from the dead
-Is a vampire/werewolf/fairy/princess/dragon/prince/god/goddess/zombie/unicorn, etc OR all the above!
-Often have a very over-used name
-The canon characters are ooc (out of character)
-This list is too painful to write more, but I'm sure you get the idea.
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-Creating your character, Starting traits-

What is their name and/or nickname? If you name your character something like Sakura...go back to the name board! Also, do NOT match names with personalities!

Their age? Try not to make them YOUR age and birth date!

Height and Weight? If you don't describe these, often people will assume this is a self insert of YOU and may assume that you are VERY fat. So make this believable.

Species? Don't hybridize your favorite characters. Otherwise, they'll just end up a BLOB with eyes over here, a mouth over there, and twitching, useless limbs.

Hair color? PLEASE refrain from using a fake hair color (unnatural) or from making it the same hair color as your character's crush.

Eye color? Again, do NOT make it unnatural (like red)! ONLY make it unnatural if it's in a fantasy world. If it's oh...a world of cats, colors like yellow, gray, and (rarely) whitish are ok.

Clothing style? People won't take you seriously if you have them in ALL black or if they barely wear anything. If this is a animal (not a humanoid animal, but a ANIMAL animal), state if they're wearing something like a collar (avoid spiked/studded/chained collars).

Place they're living at? People won't take you seriously if you have your character in a place you want to live in. Like Japan.

Back story? Don't make it tragic unless it makes sense and doesn't go overboard. Also, if they have had any interaction with a canon character...Don't make them past lovers or some other junk like that!

Personality? Avoid matching this with names. Seriously.

Powers? Under NO circumstances should you make them immortal, have unmatched powers, ultimate healing skills, etc.. Make it a skill that they've been working with. Like uh....the ability to balance plates on a stick.

Weaknesses? This is very important!

Historic significants? If your character is something like a country representative or a solider, please do your research!

Remember, you should not make them look like a canon character! That's like dying Sonic green and calling it your OC!
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OC examples- This will show you good and bad examples of OCs.

Good example-
Name: Anna Herring
Nickname: Ms. Fish
Age: 24
Height/Weight: 5'3"/230 lbs
Species: Human
Hair color/eye color: Auburn/Hazel
Clothing style: Casual and modest
Current residence: Houston, Texas
Back story: Grew up in a small town and went to collage. Her family lives in Austin. She has three siblings: two brothers, and a sister (Names are: Fred, James, and Sarah). Anna works at a veterinary clinic.
Personality: Very curious and bold
Powers: n/a
Weaknesses: She has a really bad cavity and has bad year-round allergies to the pollen.
Historical significants: n/a

Bad example-
Name: Katsumi (Victorious beauty) Yuzuki (Gentle moon)
Nickname: Sexy goddess
Age: (1,5)32,783,278,937,284 (if it's a "immortal" age and has anything from 1,1 to 1,6...you're basically hiding YOUR age)
Height/Weight: 6'2"/ 90 lbs
Species: Human with hints of elf, vampire, and dragon.
Hair color/eye color: Pink/Yellow
Clothing style: Sexy and cute clothes
Current residence: Japan, baby! Yeah!
Back story: All her parents DIED! She's BFF's with Naruto, Ichigo, and Sonic. Her boyfriend is Megatron. She's married to Gary Oak! It's ok though because everyone likes her and even fights for her LOVE!
Personality: Cute, innocent, flirty
Powers: She's immortal. She's got like the ability to speak to animals! She can run really fast and fly. Oh yeah! She can breath fire and if someone dies, she can bring them back!
Weaknesses: What weaknesses?
Historical significants: She's the reason (insert war here) started but she stopped it ALL by herself!


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There you go. I hope this guide has helped!
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DanielsMyMiddleName Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Name: Pei Gwan
Age: 22,820 Earth Years (35 Their Years)
(Their age - Human age: 652-1)
Birth Date: June 9
Height: 5 feet
Weight: 158 lb
Species: Kutonian
Haircolor: Fading Grey
Eye color: Lavander/Purple
Clothing Style: Casual: T-shirt, plad button-up shirt half way buttoned up over it, shirt
has paint on it and sleeves are rolled up to her elbows, she has a (literally) sloppy pun as her
hair style, and sometimes uses a barrete to pin a strand of hair out of her face. She also has a backpack usually filled
with hygenic items.
Place they'e living at: She lived with a human couple she encountered while she first landed on
earth.
Back Story: She was just a simple Kutonian with a job of finding out what Earth was like, she
went to Earth, and unlike most of the clumsy aliens, she DIDN'T CRASH LAND. Her ship is a
one seater that can transform into a motercycle when needed. (I wanted to do a bike, but... How would that
work? The engine and stuff needs a place to go!) She first met a couple of a thin blonde woman named Margret,
and a thick tan man named Gregory. At first, the couple didn't trust her one big, and were actually planning to
turn her into the goverment, but after she proved that she wasn't there to take over, or anything crazy that most
aliens seem to do, they decided to take her in. After a month of living there she got a job at a coffee shop (NOT STARBUCKS. Haha.)
and now enjoys painting, sculpting, and other craft projects. (Expect for wood work and melding. She's terrible at that!)
She doesn't really do anything special, or have a crazy back story. She's just an adverage joe.
Personality: She's usually sweet, but can get moody sometimes. She can get carried away with talking about plants, such as flowers or vegetables,
but doesn't talk much since she can't speak Enlgish well, but she's studied it and her grammer is as good as an educated 9TH graders. (She's only been on
Earth for about 8-9 years. She's kind of a quick learner.) Usually when she's upset, she doesn't show it, and she's VERY protective of Margret and Greogory.
Powers: She can mimic the look of other creatures, but barely uses it. She also heals twice as quickly as a human, but gets infected if it's not washed daily.
Weakenesses: Babies (a fear of them since they're germy little demons), she greatly dislikes dust and dirty things (like a dirty covered floor, dusty tv screen) and
pickled or steamed foods (she gets extremely sick).


How about this? xD
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elefiore Featured By Owner Edited Feb 26, 2015
How is mine? He's in a fantasy novel I'm trying to write

Name - Rufio (I didn't really think of a surname)
Nickname -  n/a
Age - 23 

Height/Weight - around 6 ft/
Species - Half Vahirden (race made by me: usually have black/silver hair, black or gray eyes and pale skin) and half elf (LOTR-like)
Hair color/eye color - Black with a dark red strand/Light ice blue
Clothing style - light armor, leather, cotton or (more generally) natural materials, often dark
Current residence - Relenia (it's kind of a camp-town of people that don't want to fight in the war between races, it's kept hidden with magic)
Back story - He never met his parents and the "leader" (?) of the realm adopted him and got him trained by masters in his army, to make him a perfect-trained soldier. At war, his only friend dies, so he suddenly becomes really introverted, emotionless and rebellious. He escapes to the forest and lives there for some time, learning natural magic from Nymphs, then some of the soldiers that fought with him find him and all together, after gaining his trust, they found Relenia and start to live there peacefully with also prople of other races with their same way of thinking.
Personality - At first: comprehensive, rational, sensitive and a bit hot-headed. Later: really introverted, cynical (except he shows mercy sometimes), rebellious and calm (looking). Sometimes (rarely, anyway) he lets others see his fragile side.
Powers - He's expecially good with magic, "stealth" and throwing knives (and quite good with one-handed swords)
Weaknesses - 1. When he sees blood (like other Vahirdens) he goes berserk and becomes way too impulsive, has improved refletions and finds it difficult to distinguish between friends and enemies; 2. He doesn't care at all of hurting people's feelings; 3. He's not really good with expressing his feelings (*ahem* when and if he has any); 4. Sometimes, very rarely, he lets others see his fragile side: he gets depressed and (yes, he does) cries, or he gets too angry and punches something until he's calm again.
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SpeedySonica Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Artist
Mine is in fantasy world...so they have some unnatural hairs and magic pets

Name: Sonica Hayaine
Nickname: Ribbon Girl or Sonka
Age: 15 
Height: Short (I can't say how short because I don't even think of it...juts immagine how short is Taiga Aisaka...)
Species: Human
Hair/Eye: Dodger blue,Green(right dark left lime)
Clothing: Skirts with leggings,clothes with long sleeves (colors: blue but sometimes depend of the color)
Personality: Calm,serious,out of earth,curious,loyal with friends and shy
Weakness: usually can't understand fastly,afraid of high and..well..spiders...ice-cream,things that make her curious,can sometimes get easily distracted
Powers: Can draw and make it alive but with time limit (30 sec or 1 min)
Back Story: She live in Haru Hana Village with her parents and she have a younger sister,Lea,and their flying bunny Kirimo but then they tranfered in AkiYami Town for her mom and dad's works problems
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Loyalshadows Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student Artist
This helped A LOT!
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TheHokum Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  New member
how is mine?

Name: Johanna James
Nickname: Jojo, Ginger, Redhead
Age: 18
Height: 4'11/96lbs
Species: Human
Hair Colour/Eye Colour: Ginger, blue eyes
Clothing: gothic chic, latest trend
Current Residence: Park Slope, New York
Backstory: Lived with her mother Madison James and her husband until she turned 16. She wanted to be emancipated after having what she called the last fight with her step father about what she wanted to go to college for.
Personality: Snarky, Sarcastic, Introverted and Serious
Powers: n/a
Weaknesses: Sinus problems, anger management issues, really "touchy" when it comes to someone doubting her
historical significants: n/a
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CelestialWolf66 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, so I'm leaning in and out of this idea I have for my character so I want to know if it comes out mary-sue-ish:

Aurora (my character) is the daughter of Glacia, the head of their clan, and Glacia wants Aurora to accept immortality when she reaches master status (a rare thing to happen) and becomes the prophesied Dragon Guardian (the name is still changing). But Aurora doesn't want to be immortal because she has a fear of leaving her friends behind. Story goes on and in order to save the world/land, she has to become the thing she doesn't want, immortal. She does so but has to stay in the temple (as a spirit) to protect the land, and as she watches the world change she watch over her friends until the day she is needed again.

You see, my definition of immortality is becoming a spirit (or something like that) and I want to know if that feature is counted as mary-sue-ish? If you don't mind answering.
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rainbowwolf3 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I really found his really helpful! Though I'm still having trouble making my character less marysuesh.
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KawaiiJoltic Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, this is a pretty good guide. Just for fun, I thought it would be funny to ask you to review some Pokémon OCs I made a long time ago, before I knew what a Mary Sue was. I know they're REALLY bad, so I just thought they'd be nice for laughs. 

Name: Natasha Acamine 
Nickname: Nat
Age: 11
Height/Weight: Pretty short and slight
Species: Human
Hair color/eye color: Light brown hair, leaf green eyes
Clothing style: Dresses like Leaf, but with a yellow scarf
Current residence: Twinleaf Town, but has an underground secret base 
Back story: A childhood friend of Dawn and Barry, the latter of which she has a crush on. Her mother is a Pokemon researcher and former contest champion who is very wealthy, she had a Jigglypuff, Trapinch, Torchic, Duskull, and Bulbasaur before she started her journey. Made friends with Ash, Paul, and Zoey, the latter of which she travelled with on her journey alongside Barry. Went after both Contests and Gyms, which even though she has a canon objection to this, Zoey didn't frown upon. 
Personality: Kind and soft spoken, nice to nearly everyone. 
Powers: A bit of empathic powers. 
Weaknesses: Tends to get very upset when something happens to someone she cares about; fell into deep depression when her Porygon was kidnapped, tends to underestimate her own abilities. 
Historical significants: Helps save the world a few times alongside Ash. 

And here we have the REALLY bad one. Feel free to laugh. 
Name: Katana Veon
Nickname: Kat
Age: 14
Height/Weight: Tall, lithe
Species: Human
Hair color/eye color: Brown hair in a style rather similar to Usagi's from Sailor Moon, orange eyes that look like fire with red and yellow towards the top and bottom, respectively. 
Clothing style: Burgundy ninja uniform, a hat that looks like the Pokemon Center attendants, but burgundy and with a ninja star symbol rather than a cross. 
Current residence: Pallet Town
Back story: Childhood friend of Ash's, (she might have had a crush on him) hates Gary with a burning passion due to him bullying her as a child. Her parents were both ninjas, so she trained as one as well. Rather skilled at many forms of combat, Pokemon training included. 
Personality: Sweet when not on ninja duty, fierce and cold when in uniform. 
Powers: Ninjitsu
Weaknesses: So cold at times that people don't recognize her or like her. (Yeah, I was younger, okay?)
Historical significants: Helps Ash out a few times, travels with him for a while

I'm really sorry. Looking back, I can't believe I was really such a Suethor, though I never got around to publishing any of this, thank God. 
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SHSLMuffin Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  New member Hobbyist Artist
o m f g
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KawaiiJoltic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I know. Terrible. Truly loathesome. 
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KatenKyoytsu Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
I saw your page on making an OC and I wanted to see if I'm going in the right direction
Manga: Pandora Hearts
Name:, Diasake Baskerville
He's well dressed, skinny, black hair with natural white highlights.
Nickname: Scars
Because his whole back is covered with them.
Age: Physical: 21 Real:121
Height/Height: 6ft 3inch, 170 lbs, skinny on the lean side
Hair color/Eye color: Black with natural white highlights, black with a few sparkles of red.
Species: Baskerville
Past: Before he was a Baskerville he was subjected to very horrific experiences (all Baskervilles are) alongside his childhood friend, Charlotte who is also a Baskerville. Many people don't like him and he will hurt anyone who hurts his family, his fellow Baskervilles.
Personality: Aloof, cold, stern, patient
Powers: Has a contract with the Chain Gryphon who is one of the 5 Black Winged Chains but is not the strongest. Trying to think of an original power, need some help with that.
Weaknesses: Family, over thinking, always struggling with what is right and wrong
What do you think can be improved?
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Teleway Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
Forgive me, I don't know the manga, so I can't judge this oc properly.
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shimmerwolfgirl Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student Artist
the 1st example was so realistic
the 2nd was.................stuff


im more of a fantasy person so only some don't count 4 me >w<

(wuts a canon???) 
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Teleway Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
Canon basically (in literature) "is the material accepted as part of the story in an individual fictional universe" So anything the creator of the book, manga, comic, etc says has happened, is accepted.

So some examples would be: -In My Little Pony, it's canon that Twilight is Princess Celestia's student.
- In Dragon Ball Z, it's canon that Goku and Chichi are married, and Vegeta and Bulma are married.
- In the book series (about cats) Warriors, it's canon that Rusty is accepted into Thunderclan.

What wouldn't be canon: -Pinkie pie is instead Celestia's student.
-Goku and Vegeta ditch their wives and children to be together.
-Rusty gets accepted into Shadowclan instead.                     
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shimmerwolfgirl Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Student Artist
ohhh
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EveFTW Featured By Owner Edited Dec 5, 2014
Uhh... So I made an oc....
Well, it's a work in progress, so yeah...
It's also from an anime, so if something sounds weird, it's probably following the plot of the story.
Name: Di (Short for Diana, but Di sounds cool)
Age: 16
Height: 5'7 (Is that too tall?
Weight: (I'm not sure what the average height for a girl that's 5'7 is...)
Species: Human
Hair color: White (It's normal, because my OC is from this anime where there's this place where white hair is natural, so it's not too weird. I hope.)
Eye color: CHANGES COLORS!!!11 (Jk, blue xD)
Personality: Serious but not like too serious, friendly, a bit introverted, sometimes greedy, especially when there is something that evolves money.
Weaknesses: She has a lot of pride, and that gets to her head. She is also deadly afraid of fire, death in general, and loosing her friends.
Powers: Pssh. She doesn't have any.
Clothing Style: The typical outfits that they wear in the shows. So yeah, the normal stuff.
Backstory: (I tried to tone down the Mary Sue-ness for this. Also, like I said earlier, this is my oc for an anime, so if something sounds weird, sorry) Di was born as a servant for royalty. She became friends with a servant there, leading her to meet the heir to the throne as a child. Then, many years later, to escape from the evil queen, the three of them escape via aircrafts to meet the main characters and a bunch of stuff happens.
....So, how bad is it? It's my first oc and all, so....
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Teleway Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
This sounds good~
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EveFTW Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
Thank you! :D
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Teleway Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
You're welcome!
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SugarLlamaz Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate those oc's that are related to canon!
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Teleway Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
"Hi! I'm the sister of Sonic and cousin of Naruto! ALL the boys love me including my siblings."

I know what you mean.
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HazardPlays Featured By Owner Edited Nov 4, 2014
This reminds me so much of when I first made Hazard (my Sonic OC). He was literally a green Sonic with cyan eyes and shoes. -_- Back then, he was "2OP4U." Now, he's just an average sword/magic robot thing. He has four forms, not counting normal form. They're Fire, Freeze, Shock, and Wind. These forms were made to correspond to his elemental magic. Weaknesses depend on the form. Normal weaknesses are water getting into his circuits, a drill to the face (or any other extremely pointy object), and giant lazors. He has the Ars Arcanum attack (six hits in the roleplays I use him in), which makes him pretty darn exhausted, and even a Limit (Hazard Laser). How well do you say I did?
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MistTheShipper Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice tips! I'm trying to make myself a normal OC, do you mind giving me tips?

This is what I have so far-
Name: Catrina Leslie
Nickname: Cat
Age: 16
Height;Weight: 4'10";110 pounds
Hair color: Redish brown
Eye color: dark brown
Species: Human
Hometown: Adelento, California
Personality: She's very clumsy and trips over everything. However, she is very loyal, and claims she can defeat anyone by making them laugh to death as a joke.
Family: Both her parents and her twin sister
Backstory: (Haven't made it quite yet~)  
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PancakesTheCow Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014
I've never really written something like this out before, But I figured I'd give it a shot. This is my OC for a universe I created where the technology to give about 20% of the world psychic powers exists. If you have any suggestions to help me, I would love to hear them.

Name: Ian Stewart
Nickname: Mail
Age: 22
Height/Weight: 5'8" / 147 lbs
Hair color/Eye color: Light Brown, Brown
Species: Human
Clothing Style: Very casual except when at work, then always in uniform.
Current residence: Outskirts of Washington D.C.
Back story: Born to Evan and Natalie Stewart, both working for the government. Growing up in the shadow of the nation's capital with his parents both being government employees, Ian tried his best to strive for something great. Although he always worked hard to achieve something he deemed as great, he didn't have as much raw talent as many of his peers, and in his own opinion could never match up to them. Quickly loosing his drive, Ian decided to join the military, where he trained extensively as a pilot. His parents, unable to bear the thought of their only son being deployed to a warzone, pulled strings to get him a job with the P.A.I.D. (Psychic Anomaly Investigation Department). He now works as a field pilot, flying his team to and from mission areas investigating dangerous individuals with psychic abilities (This is where his nickname comes from, as he acts as their "mailman", delivering them to missions). What he did not realize was that he actually had to join the team on missions as well.  
Personality: Hasty to make decisions, and often doesn't think things through. Is very kind and quite quick-witted, but can come off as passive-aggressive. He will put in extra effort in trying to be nice to those who are nice to him, but is quick to be harsh on himself.
Powers: Is an above-average pilot, knows a multitude of random (and for the most part) useless movie facts, competent in ranged and hand-to-hand combat, has political connections through parents, makes a mean schnitzel.  
Weaknesses: Is in the 80% of world population that does not possess psychic powers. Often lacks focus and concentration, and is his own worst enemy. Sucks at board and card games. Very susceptible to allergies in the fall months. The very mention of marshmallows make him green. 
Interests: Watches movies at any and all available opportunities, Collects old VHS tapes and original film reels, occasionally watching them when he gets the chance. 
Historical significants: Found an old film reel from a film previously thought lost whilst digging around at a garage sale for $100. He then turned around and sold it to a museum for a couple thousand dollars, where the reel was restored and the film archived.
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Teleway Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014
"The very mention of marshmallows make him green."  He's a Martian! Run away!!! 

Kidding. 


This is a very good character~ I don't really see anything that needs correcting.
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PancakesTheCow Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014
Thanks for getting back to me so quickly!
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Teleway Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
You're welcome!
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frogben Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
i kinda have a problem where i can't help but make my gemsona (steven universe yousee) look basically like me, and use my real name, help?
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Teleway Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Try to think outside the box, a character is a character.

Try to make the person not like you but something that ISN'T you, like how in Steven Universe they are all diffrent, the characters aren't all like the creator. Try to make the character strange and exciting but fits into the show obviously, try to give the character an interesting (but not sob story stuff) back story. Try to make them original and use a name that's very fitting for the show. Even if the character is someone who you long to be, I don't mean just in looks but in personality then go for it! Hey that's a start! Then with that starting character you can start to develop them.
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Buttons551 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That bad OC example was really funny.
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Teleway Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
Thanks~

Sadly, I've seen many like it.
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Buttons551 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I actually haven't seen many like that.
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Teleway Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
If you find the right places, you'll find hoards of em. x_x
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Buttons551 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, I hate OCs like that.
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Teleway Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
Lol same here...I've dealt with a few in recent years as well and it just makes me wonder why folks don't look up the basic do's and don'ts at least.
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Buttons551 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same here.
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Milkypop12 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student Artist
This really helped me alot for my Hetalia OC.
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Londonthegoat Featured By Owner Edited Aug 20, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I tried to make a perfect OC. (What I mean by Perfect OC means I think I did good with it)

Name: Latona Redfern
Nickname: Lattie
Age:15
Height/Weight: 6'3"/164 lbs.
Species: Human with a little touch of Fairy and Mermaid
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Sea Blue
Clothing Style: Space
Current Residence: Summerlin, Nevada
Backstory: Born and Grew up in New York. Moved to Summerlin one day and never came back. Her parents still live at New York. Almost everyone at school likes her, but some people make her misreble. She has a cousin at Summerlin named Cece and a grandmother in Brazil.
Personality: Shy about her city, Creative, Brave
Powers: Latona can breathe underwater and dreamwalk. But when the person wakes up she appears in her room.
Weakness: Fear, Thunder
Historical signficants: Latona created the first mermaid kingdom

Favorites:
Hobby: Sports, Ballet, Drawing
Color: Indigo
Food: French Toast Sticks
Best Friends: Quade Finder, Kalifa Shildneck and Victoria Suzette Trainor.
Crush: Charlie Ryu

Hates:
Hobby: Shooting Birds
Color: Anything that is gloomy, Besides of black
Food: Anything with Really Hot Sauce
People: Fancy Benny, Wava Hafler and Olga Pauling

My Perfect OC (What I mean by this is my Mary Sue)

Name: Ame (Rain) Mirikiteki (Attractive)
Nickname: Super Fancy Sexy Girl
Age: 143,024
Height/Weight: 8'12/1,000 lbs.
Species: Human, Alien, Fairy, Mermaid, Elf, Troll, Vampire, Ghost, Zombie
Hair Color: All Colors Of Rainbow
Eye Color: First Eye is Teal, Second is Purple, Third is Hazel
Clothing Style: Sexy and Badass Clothes
Backstory: EVERY PARENT AND GUARDIAN OF AME DIEEEEEEED! She is married with Sobatchi Mirikiteki and has 30 kids and they are all GIRLS! Karen, Selena, Joan, Jenna, Jenny, Katelina, Sophia, Lala, Hannah, Winnie, Eva etc. Every bad guy is her slave and Ame is the queen of Cookieland.
Personality: Innocent, Cute, Sexy, Funny, Awesome, Fabulous, Fancy
Powers: Ame can control minds and breathe underwater. Do you know she can breathe fire and can fly? She can transport, Control time, Dreamwalk, Immortal! She can talk to animals and make anything come to life! She can make people fall in love.
Weakness: NOTHING!!!!!
Historical Significants: Ame is Gorege Washington's Daughter and she stopped World War III

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Ame has 60 kids. They are still ALL GIRLS! She is married to Sobatchi and Michetu.
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Teleway Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
Hmm...may want to change it up here and there. It's pretty good but could use some modifying.
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Londonthegoat Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yea
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AnimeLov3r253 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
I hate when your parents make you babysit a 10 year old then, they want to play school , they make their character a mary-sue and it would be a pain to explain what that is to them so you have to deal with it -_- 
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Teleway Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Eh...I tend to sit a kid down and explain things with them. Then again, I'm really patient.
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AnimeLov3r253 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Ah , everytime i explain they're completely confused
i don't think i'm very patient though. 
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Teleway Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
Use simple words. My problem tends to be using collage-level vocabulary.
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AnimeLov3r253 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
Ok thanks ^_^
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Teleway Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
You're welcome~
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ChocolateChipCaramel Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ugh. Mary-sues make me so mad when I see them in a roleplay or anything. Especially when they were abused/abandoned by their parents because of their powers.
Then someone else joins with another Mary-sue and they start arguing about the other copying their character.
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Teleway Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
I know right? It's so stupid that I would love to sit people through a literature class or something.
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AllTheFandoms134 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But I thought Megatron was my boyfriend! MEGATRON SENPAI WHY! (Jk I freaking hate those kinds of characters)
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Teleway Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
xD Same here. Especially if it's an obviously English-speaking character throwing out random Japanese words. "Ohhh! But he's my waifu! He's so kawii desu! Desu desu desu!"
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