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Ok, I've been seeing really crappy OC's (original characters) floating around the place lately. I thought that I could help you guys out here.
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-What is a original character? It's a fan-made character someone usually makes for a book, show, game, etc that is used as a means to "interact" with the main characters of a book, show, game, etc. Unfortunately, some people get this wrong and their character/self-insert may become a Mary/Gary Sue.

-What is a Mary/Gary Sue? Well....they have the following traits:

-The plot of the book, show, game, etc goes THEIR way (If this only briefly mentions a canon character and is more oc-centric, it's usually ok)
-They have NO weaknesses
-Any and all characters are attracted to them
-They have a TRAGIC past
-They are a long lost relative or are the long lost lover/girlfriend/boyfriend to a character or more
-They die a TRAGIC death
-Every good guy and bad guy likes or loves them
-Immortal, can bring people back from the dead
-Is a vampire/werewolf/fairy/princess/dragon/prince/god/goddess/zombie/unicorn, etc OR all the above!
-Often have a very over-used name
-The canon characters are ooc (out of character)
-This list is too painful to write more, but I'm sure you get the idea.
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-Creating your character, Starting traits-

What is their name and/or nickname? If you name your character something like Sakura...go back to the name board! Also, do NOT match names with personalities!

Their age? Try not to make them YOUR age and birth date!

Height and Weight? If you don't describe these, often people will assume this is a self insert of YOU and may assume that you are VERY fat. So make this believable.

Species? Don't hybridize your favorite characters. Otherwise, they'll just end up a BLOB with eyes over here, a mouth over there, and twitching, useless limbs.

Hair color? PLEASE refrain from using a fake hair color (unnatural) or from making it the same hair color as your character's crush.

Eye color? Again, do NOT make it unnatural (like red)! ONLY make it unnatural if it's in a fantasy world. If it's oh...a world of cats, colors like yellow, gray, and (rarely) whitish are ok.

Clothing style? People won't take you seriously if you have them in ALL black or if they barely wear anything. If this is a animal (not a humanoid animal, but a ANIMAL animal), state if they're wearing something like a collar (avoid spiked/studded/chained collars).

Place they're living at? People won't take you seriously if you have your character in a place you want to live in. Like Japan.

Back story? Don't make it tragic unless it makes sense and doesn't go overboard. Also, if they have had any interaction with a canon character...Don't make them past lovers or some other junk like that!

Personality? Avoid matching this with names. Seriously.

Powers? Under NO circumstances should you make them immortal, have unmatched powers, ultimate healing skills, etc.. Make it a skill that they've been working with. Like uh....the ability to balance plates on a stick.

Weaknesses? This is very important!

Historic significants? If your character is something like a country representative or a solider, please do your research!

Remember, you should not make them look like a canon character! That's like dying Sonic green and calling it your OC!
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OC examples- This will show you good and bad examples of OCs.

Good example-
Name: Anna Herring
Nickname: Ms. Fish
Age: 24
Height/Weight: 5'3"/230 lbs
Species: Human
Hair color/eye color: Auburn/Hazel
Clothing style: Casual and modest
Current residence: Houston, Texas
Back story: Grew up in a small town and went to collage. Her family lives in Austin. She has three siblings: two brothers, and a sister (Names are: Fred, James, and Sarah). Anna works at a veterinary clinic.
Personality: Very curious and bold
Powers: n/a
Weaknesses: She has a really bad cavity and has bad year-round allergies to the pollen.
Historical significants: n/a

Bad example-
Name: Katsumi (Victorious beauty) Yuzuki (Gentle moon)
Nickname: Sexy goddess
Age: (1,5)32,783,278,937,284 (if it's a "immortal" age and has anything from 1,1 to 1,6...you're basically hiding YOUR age)
Height/Weight: 6'2"/ 90 lbs
Species: Human with hints of elf, vampire, and dragon.
Hair color/eye color: Pink/Yellow
Clothing style: Sexy and cute clothes
Current residence: Japan, baby! Yeah!
Back story: All her parents DIED! She's BFF's with Naruto, Ichigo, and Sonic. Her boyfriend is Megatron. She's married to Gary Oak! It's ok though because everyone likes her and even fights for her LOVE!
Personality: Cute, innocent, flirty
Powers: She's immortal. She's got like the ability to speak to animals! She can run really fast and fly. Oh yeah! She can breath fire and if someone dies, she can bring them back!
Weaknesses: What weaknesses?
Historical significants: She's the reason (insert war here) started but she stopped it ALL by herself!


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There you go. I hope this guide has helped!
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Buttons551 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That bad OC example was really funny.
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Teleway Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Thanks~

Sadly, I've seen many like it.
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Buttons551 Featured By Owner 9 hours ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I actually haven't seen many like that.
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Teleway Featured By Owner 3 hours ago
If you find the right places, you'll find hoards of em. x_x
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Milkypop12 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
This really helped me alot for my Hetalia OC.
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Londonthegoat Featured By Owner Edited Aug 20, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artist
I tried to make a perfect OC. (What I mean by Perfect OC means I think I did good with it)

Name: Latona Redfern
Nickname: Lattie
Age:15
Height/Weight: 6'3"/164 lbs.
Species: Human with a little touch of Fairy and Mermaid
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Sea Blue
Clothing Style: Space
Current Residence: Summerlin, Nevada
Backstory: Born and Grew up in New York. Moved to Summerlin one day and never came back. Her parents still live at New York. Almost everyone at school likes her, but some people make her misreble. She has a cousin at Summerlin named Cece and a grandmother in Brazil.
Personality: Shy about her city, Creative, Brave
Powers: Latona can breathe underwater and dreamwalk. But when the person wakes up she appears in her room.
Weakness: Fear, Thunder
Historical signficants: Latona created the first mermaid kingdom

Favorites:
Hobby: Sports, Ballet, Drawing
Color: Indigo
Food: French Toast Sticks
Best Friends: Quade Finder, Kalifa Shildneck and Victoria Suzette Trainor.
Crush: Charlie Ryu

Hates:
Hobby: Shooting Birds
Color: Anything that is gloomy, Besides of black
Food: Anything with Really Hot Sauce
People: Fancy Benny, Wava Hafler and Olga Pauling

My Perfect OC (What I mean by this is my Mary Sue)

Name: Ame (Rain) Mirikiteki (Attractive)
Nickname: Super Fancy Sexy Girl
Age: 143,024
Height/Weight: 8'12/1,000 lbs.
Species: Human, Alien, Fairy, Mermaid, Elf, Troll, Vampire, Ghost, Zombie
Hair Color: All Colors Of Rainbow
Eye Color: First Eye is Teal, Second is Purple, Third is Hazel
Clothing Style: Sexy and Badass Clothes
Backstory: EVERY PARENT AND GUARDIAN OF AME DIEEEEEEED! She is married with Sobatchi Mirikiteki and has 30 kids and they are all GIRLS! Karen, Selena, Joan, Jenna, Jenny, Katelina, Sophia, Lala, Hannah, Winnie, Eva etc. Every bad guy is her slave and Ame is the queen of Cookieland.
Personality: Innocent, Cute, Sexy, Funny, Awesome, Fabulous, Fancy
Powers: Ame can control minds and breathe underwater. Do you know she can breathe fire and can fly? She can transport, Control time, Dreamwalk, Immortal! She can talk to animals and make anything come to life! She can make people fall in love.
Weakness: NOTHING!!!!!
Historical Significants: Ame is Gorege Washington's Daughter and she stopped World War III

Favorites:
EVERYTHING!

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What about it?

Other:
Ame has 60 kids. They are still ALL GIRLS! She is married to Sobatchi and Michetu.
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Teleway Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
Hmm...may want to change it up here and there. It's pretty good but could use some modifying.
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Londonthegoat Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artist
Yea
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AnimeLov3r253 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
I hate when your parents make you babysit a 10 year old then, they want to play school , they make their character a mary-sue and it would be a pain to explain what that is to them so you have to deal with it -_- 
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Teleway Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Eh...I tend to sit a kid down and explain things with them. Then again, I'm really patient.
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